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Your writing draws me in from the very first line. The way you describe Jess’s state of mind and the atmosphere in the woods, I felt like I was right there with her—watching the sunlight flicker through the leaves and feeling the tension in the air. You have a gift for capturing that moment just before something magical happens, and I love how you balance the wonder of discovery with the ever-present sense of danger Jess faces. Ortek is such a vivid, intriguing character, and the details about his appearance and greeting made him feel both otherworldly and real.

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I’m not really into fantasy, but this segment of your story really drew me in. Perhaps because I spend so much of my time staring into my nearby woods and imaging the stories the trees and animals could tell. You do have a gift!

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